I make the world warmer
I create oxygen for the living things
WE INFLUENCE THE ENVIRONMENT
I melt ice in the North and South Poles
I enrich the soil for plants
WE INFLUENCE THE ENVIRONMENT
I make the summers hotter and the winters colder
I help things grow and live
WE INFLUENCE THE ENVIRONMENT
I destroy the world
I make the world better
Genti,
ReplyDeleteI like that the beginning of each stanza reflects both voices equally. I am wondering if one voice is a large corporation out to do harm to the environment (i.e: gas guzzlers) and the other is from the perspective of a tree?
You are still missing a reflective piece, and I believe it is what can help to enrich your poem even further by having explanatory notes on the process of writing your poem and what influenced you in particular to write it.
-Ms. Hoque
i like this poem alot. it makes me think deeper about the world. good job!
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